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by Bad Horse
Sat Jul 28, 2012 2:31 pm
Forum: Writers Forum
Topic: Writing help sites
Replies: 8
Views: 29762

Re: Writing help sites

Can I just say no? Said is what you should be using 90% of the time. Said Bookisms do nothing but distract you from the story by repeating what we already know, and taking us out of the story. Either use said, or completely avoid the word said altogether, but constantly using said Bookisms will onl...
by Bad Horse
Sat Jul 28, 2012 2:30 pm
Forum: Writers Forum
Topic: Writing help sites
Replies: 8
Views: 29762

Re: Writing help sites

Mister_Clacky wrote:The best writing resource I have found is the Writing Excuses Audio Blog
Writing Excuses is great! And free! I bought their first CD, I don't even remember why. I think I had a brief bout of morality.
by Bad Horse
Fri Jul 27, 2012 10:47 pm
Forum: Writers Forum
Topic: Mr. Clacky's Friday Forum #1: Starting an Action Sequence.
Replies: 5
Views: 22500

Re: Mr. Clacky's Friday Forum #1: Starting an Action Sequenc

Hmm... thinking... thinking...
Nope. I've never written an action sequence. Ever. In, maybe, 100 stories. Dammit. WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME?
by Bad Horse
Fri Jul 27, 2012 10:16 pm
Forum: Writers Forum
Topic: Would like feedback on an odd story
Replies: 0
Views: 13284

Would like feedback on an odd story

http://static.fimfiction.net/images/story_images/31288_r.jpg?1339284975 Twenty Minutes : Is it worth risking your life to save a stranger? What if you knew you could only save her for twenty minutes? This is a tricky one-shot psychological story, about a pegasus who's a sex slave to the zebras duri...