The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
I just wanted to let you know, I am close to starting your fic. I only need to read about 1 and a half chapter of 2 other stories and then I am going to start reading The Last Sentinel.
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Thank you, f1r3. Again, much appreciated. <:3
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Ok I started reading it now. I got about halfway in the first chapter yesterday evening and I think it's good so far.
(You already had your first bonus point, when I read it references Project Horizons. ^^)
(You already had your first bonus point, when I read it references Project Horizons. ^^)
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Woohoo! \o/
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Woohoo? \o/?
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Woohoo? \o/?
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
It's going good. I just finished reading chapter five. And I am still not sure, if I should call frost overpowered or just epic. xD
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Reflection Four is now up. Old habits... die hard.
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/24 ... e-and-Fall
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/24 ... e-and-Fall
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Herpderp. Three days late on here, but Reflection Five is now up.
It's far easier to destroy than to create...
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/25 ... ng-Bridges
It's far easier to destroy than to create...
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/25 ... ng-Bridges
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Reflection Six is now up. Find comfort in the cold...
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/26 ... 3A-Calling
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/26 ... 3A-Calling
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Intermission One is up. Look to the past for answers and guidance. Just don't stay there.
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/27 ... ission-One
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/27 ... ission-One
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Reflection Seven is up. As new paths open to us, we must inevitably travel down roads that our friends cannot. Never forget where you came from and who led you there- to them, we must bid farewell.
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/28 ... l-Flourish
Link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/28 ... l-Flourish
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria