Fallout Equestria: Aqua Pura

[The Jack]

The repairpony Rusty Gears never thought his life would be as interesting, as heroic, as that of the Stable Dweller or the Security Mare. What happens when he suddenly thrown into sinister conspiracy? A Fallout: Equestria fanfic.

Chapter one is up on;
Gdocs : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OE8 ... t?hl=en_US
Fanfiction.net : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7582895/1/F ... _Aqua_Pura
Deviantart.com : http://thanos-san.deviantart.com/art/Fa ... -270937914
Fimfiction.net : http://poni.0au.de/story/3316/Fallout%3 ... -Aqua-Pura

I'll also be submitting it to EqD tomorrow.
I know, it's kind of like attention-whoring to submit it to so many places,but... I don't care. xD
I would greatly appreciate any constructive critique and comments you may have! =D

[DancesOnTheAshes]

I sent an ask for access if that's okay with you. I'll read it after I'm done tumblring

[The Jack]

I sent an ask for access if that's okay with you. I'll read it after I'm done tumblring

Okay, I have no idea how to grant you access specifically... So I set the doc to be viewable by anyone. =D
I feel kinda stupid not remembering to do that. xD

[Arcane_Scroll]

Can you write up a little introduction for your story? It would really help.

[The Jack]

Can you write up a little introduction for your story? It would really help.

Hm. What kind of introduction? À la what Kkat did?

[Kashin]

"Description: Fallout. With ponies! Set in an alternate future, one pony must learn to survive in a blasted, poisoned land... and possibly, with the aid of friends made along the way, bring new light into the darkness of post-apocalyptic Equestria."

I figure he means something like this.

[The Jack]

"Description: Fallout. With ponies! Set in an alternate future, one pony must learn to survive in a blasted, poisoned land... and possibly, with the aid of friends made along the way, bring new light into the darkness of post-apocalyptic Equestria."

I figure he means something like this.

Oh! Of course; I knew I had forgotten something.
I have those in the fimfic and ff.net docs though; I'll just copy it xD

I am horribad at synopsises though; that one in particular sounds übercheesy to me xD

[Arcane_Scroll]

Thanks, got it from your fanfiction.net page and updated the stories entry. I didn't see it at your fimfiction page.

[The Jack]

Thanks, got it from your fanfiction.net page and updated the stories entry. I didn't see it at your fimfiction page.

It should be there... But I literally made the fimfiction account for that story, so I probably did something wrong. I'll see if I can't fix it.
EDIT: There we go; fixed it! =D


Also, which story entry?

[Arcane_Scroll]

The story section of this site, I provide a link to every Fallout: Equestria side story I can find.

http://fallout-equestria.com/story/54

http://fallout-equestria.com/stories