I'm new here, so uh... please don't hurt me if I posted this the wrong way. I didn't know if this should go in the Writers Forum or not, but since I saw a few of these sort of threads here, I thought I may as well post here instead. In any case, the following is a link to my first ever ponyfic. It's also the first piece of writing I've done after about six months.
Anyways, feedback of any sort is much appreciated. I'm also looking for pre-readers for GDoc versions of future chapters. If interested, would you kindly slip me a PM? Thanks ahead of time to all of you for taking a quick peek.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel (fimfiction.net)
The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Last edited by Adder1 on Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:36 pm, edited 1 time in total.
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel
Alright, I'm not quite sure what the general policy is against double-posting, but ah, I'm doing it.
I'm looking for at least one pre-reader for The Last Sentinel. If anypony's interested, would you kindly notify me?
... please?
*crawls back under a rock*
I'm looking for at least one pre-reader for The Last Sentinel. If anypony's interested, would you kindly notify me?
... please?
*crawls back under a rock*
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel
found one yet?
Being evil is not the same as being heartless.
Re: Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel
*nnnno.pny*Damhoof wrote:found one yet?
Then again, it's only been two days.
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Alright, just got into chapter 10 and I'd reeeeeally like it pre-read for content stuff. So, uh, if... anypony would be interested in pre-reading... *shies away*
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
I suppose I may as well use this thread for updates. In that case, chapter 12 is up now. Craziness ensues.
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Chapter 13 is up. Revelations ensue.
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Chapter 14 is up. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned.
And Lady Luck is a bitch.
Special thanks to my two new pre-readers!
And Lady Luck is a bitch.
Special thanks to my two new pre-readers!
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Chapter 15 is up. It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything...
Special thanks to another new pre-reader!
Special thanks to another new pre-reader!
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Chapter 16 is up. THEY'RE COMING THROUGH THE WALLS!
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria