Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes Ch 7

Nightmare Luna · Post by **Nightmare Luna** » Tue Dec 13, 2011 12:53 pm

Will add this to the "to read list"..

Post by **Arcane_Scroll** » Tue Dec 13, 2011 1:25 pm

This is reminding me of the MOSPEADA episode " Forte of the Ice River City", in a good way

EDIT: Ok, only found two things. One typo and maybe a sentence that could maybe be worded better. Ending perk, awesome!

otherunicorn · Post by **otherunicorn** » Tue Dec 13, 2011 4:16 pm

Thanks for that.

otherunicorn · Post by **otherunicorn** » Wed Dec 21, 2011 7:11 pm

Chapter 6 is up for proof reading.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1odI ... T78OM/edit

otherunicorn · Post by **otherunicorn** » Thu Dec 29, 2011 3:56 am

Chapter 7 is up for proof reading.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1erX ... RbKOw/edit

Post by **Arcane_Scroll** » Thu Dec 29, 2011 4:39 am

otherunicorn wrote:Chapter 7 is up for proof reading.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1erX ... RbKOw/edit

Ok, only a couple things I found. One sentence I wasn't sure of and a case of two words swapping places. I'll read through again at lunch tomorrow at work and see if I find anything else.

BTW, Another great chapter, Loved Demi's surprise, too cute!

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