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Cloud-e
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Starting request

Post by Cloud-e » Sun Jan 15, 2012 12:43 am

I'm working on my own stories in the FO:E universe, (Real shocker there) but I was wondering if anyone would like to pre-read/edit before I permanently scar the eyes of the masses. I have a few ideas, but none of them are intended to be terrible world-shattering - just ponies making do with what they have. My personal computer recently took the short way down a tall cliff though, so most of my WIPs are hidden in a backup disk, but I can provide a couple chapters for one of the stories, if anypony's interested.
The more you can nit-pick, the better. I never am satisfied with dialogue, so I would appreciate if special attention were payed to streamlining that aspect.

And if you leave a comment, could you also tag your favorite side-story as well? Thanks.

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Re: Starting request

Post by otherunicorn » Sun Jan 15, 2012 2:01 am

The first step is to put them on google docs. Then ask. There's usually someone around here who is willing.

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Re: Starting request

Post by Arcane_Scroll » Sun Jan 15, 2012 2:18 pm


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Re: Starting request

Post by Cloud-e » Mon Jan 16, 2012 3:46 am

Thanks. Followed up on this, got a quick writing crash-course. Gave me a bunch to think about, and more to work on while waiting for my computer to return.
You can probably ignore/remove this thread for now though. It will be awhile til I have more to report.
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Re: Starting request

Post by Arcane_Scroll » Mon Jan 16, 2012 7:30 am

I'll leave it, might help others just starting out.

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