Starting request

[Cloud-e]

I'm working on my own stories in the FO:E universe, (Real shocker there) but I was wondering if anyone would like to pre-read/edit before I permanently scar the eyes of the masses. I have a few ideas, but none of them are intended to be terrible world-shattering - just ponies making do with what they have. My personal computer recently took the short way down a tall cliff though, so most of my WIPs are hidden in a backup disk, but I can provide a couple chapters for one of the stories, if anypony's interested.
The more you can nit-pick, the better. I never am satisfied with dialogue, so I would appreciate if special attention were payed to streamlining that aspect.

And if you leave a comment, could you also tag your favorite side-story as well? Thanks.

Your local sky-gazing earthpony,
Cloud

[otherunicorn]

The first step is to put them on google docs. Then ask. There's usually someone around here who is willing.

[Arcane_Scroll]

URL if you don't have it. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Kao ... n_US&pli=1

[Cloud-e]

Thanks. Followed up on this, got a quick writing crash-course. Gave me a bunch to think about, and more to work on while waiting for my computer to return.
You can probably ignore/remove this thread for now though. It will be awhile til I have more to report.

[Arcane_Scroll]

I'll leave it, might help others just starting out.