Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes Ch 7

otherunicorn · Post by **otherunicorn** » Sun Nov 27, 2011 8:02 am

Chapter 7 is up for proof reading.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1erX ... RbKOw/edit

Ken

otherunicorn · Post by **otherunicorn** » Mon Nov 28, 2011 2:15 am

Anyone?

Kashin · Post by **Kashin** » Mon Nov 28, 2011 3:20 am

I might be able to give it a run through tomorrow, but no promises.

Post by **Arcane_Scroll** » Mon Nov 28, 2011 4:41 pm

I'll read it tonight, gotta do some shopping right now.

Post by **Arcane_Scroll** » Tue Nov 29, 2011 3:34 am

I'm leaving comments as I go, I hope that helps. Mostly formatting issues so far.

otherunicorn · Post by **otherunicorn** » Tue Nov 29, 2011 4:16 am

Excellent. Thank you.

Post by **Arcane_Scroll** » Tue Nov 29, 2011 4:22 am

Ok, I just finished (finally, kept getting called away). I hope that helped. This chapter was much better now, it feels more connected to the others. I didn't find much, only one instance of "Lee", a couple typos and a few formatting issues.

otherunicorn · Post by **otherunicorn** » Tue Nov 29, 2011 4:58 am

Thanks for that. I did a search for double spaces and found quite a few more of them. Only one "Lee". That's pretty dang amazing! I was still finding them every time I proof read it myself. The problem with proofing it myself was every time I read it, I would add to it, and thus need to proof it again!

otherunicorn · Post by **otherunicorn** » Tue Dec 13, 2011 3:50 am

Chapter 5
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VMp ... 0P8vA/edit

Post by **Arcane_Scroll** » Tue Dec 13, 2011 12:34 pm

otherunicorn wrote:Chapter 5
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VMp ... 0P8vA/edit

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