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Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes Ch 7
Posted: Sun Nov 27, 2011 8:02 am
by otherunicorn
Re: Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes
Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 2:15 am
by otherunicorn
Anyone?
Re: Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes
Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 3:20 am
by Kashin
I might be able to give it a run through tomorrow, but no promises.
Re: Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes
Posted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 4:41 pm
by Arcane_Scroll
I'll read it tonight, gotta do some shopping right now.
Re: Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes
Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 3:34 am
by Arcane_Scroll
I'm leaving comments as I go, I hope that helps. Mostly formatting issues so far.
Re: Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes
Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 4:16 am
by otherunicorn
Excellent. Thank you.
Re: Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes
Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 4:22 am
by Arcane_Scroll
Ok, I just finished (finally, kept getting called away). I hope that helped. This chapter was much better now, it feels more connected to the others. I didn't find much, only one instance of "Lee", a couple typos and a few formatting issues.
Re: Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes
Posted: Tue Nov 29, 2011 4:58 am
by otherunicorn
Thanks for that. I did a search for double spaces and found quite a few more of them. Only one "Lee". That's pretty dang amazing! I was still finding them every time I proof read it myself. The problem with proofing it myself was every time I read it, I would add to it, and thus need to proof it again!
Re: Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes
Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 3:50 am
by otherunicorn
Re: Proof reading requested. We're No Heroes
Posted: Tue Dec 13, 2011 12:34 pm
by Arcane_Scroll