Fallout: Equestria Resource

Hey all, so, just wanted to make a post about the story that I'm currently in the process of writing. Was interested in seeing if anypony has any ideas, or advice for me, or just seeing what they think of the story
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/28761/F ... mare-March
If you read, please don't hesitate to tell me what you think, I aim to improve! ^_^

Thanks for your time!

Hey, I read your first chapter and it was pretty good. I'll try to get around to reading the rest soon. Great job!