FOE : MoaNW - Critique / Edit request
FOE : MoaNW - Critique / Edit request
At the moment I am writing a FOE side fic called Monarch of a New World, currently I am working on the second chapter and the full story is less than 15000 words total. I am unsure if I am going to continue after the second chapter or not, but I would like it if someone could help me critique/edit my work. I am looking for the help so that I can see my errors and improve as a writer. If anyone is available please send me a message on FiMfic - http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Lolpuma or on skype - Lolpuma642. Thank you very much.