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by Turbo740
Sun Apr 29, 2012 9:57 am
Forum: Writers Forum
Topic: Interesting Character Quirks
Replies: 28
Views: 86096

Re: Interesting Character Quirks

Interesting character quirks huh... Overhaul - The Earth pony Well my main character has a laser rifle which he simply HAS to have eg. sliced in half by a hellhound, balefire egged, frozen in ice, drowned... the list goes on, he's developed an unhealthy obsession to keeping it operable. Hes usually ...
by Turbo740
Thu Mar 29, 2012 3:58 pm
Forum: Writers Forum
Topic: Attitude towards augmentation
Replies: 17
Views: 57310

Re: Attitude towards augmentation

My character would choose bio-magical.He's very supportive of cybernetics implants and respects ponies that have them. but he see's them as status symbols rather than replacement parts. He believes that a cybernetic implant would be a disadvantage in battle. He prefers to attack from a distance rath...
by Turbo740
Thu Mar 29, 2012 6:46 am
Forum: Writers Forum
Topic: Stable numbers
Replies: 112
Views: 380869

Re: Stable numbers

Can you replace Stable 7 with Stable 91. I was in the side story comp document and someone else had already used it. I think his name was maquerade.
by Turbo740
Sat Mar 24, 2012 7:54 am
Forum: Writers Forum
Topic: Stable numbers
Replies: 112
Views: 380869

Re: Stable numbers

might as well take a few for potential stables (i havent wrote for a while and now i'm re-writing the chapters to make them better) Stable 25 - The Ice cave (water talisman froze forcing the population out into the old Equestrian tundra) ^^ (the artics lowest average temperature is 25 degress fahren...
by Turbo740
Fri Mar 02, 2012 5:06 am
Forum: Works In Progress
Topic: Fallout equestria - Endless roadtrip
Replies: 1
Views: 10546

Re: Fallout equestria - Endless roadtrip

Here's the (new updated) chapters - i'll post them here before i post them on Fimfic

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
by Turbo740
Fri Mar 02, 2012 4:50 am
Forum: Works In Progress
Topic: Fallout equestria - Endless roadtrip
Replies: 1
Views: 10546

Fallout equestria - Endless roadtrip

Hi guys. I sortof need a proofreader or two to check through my fanfic to give me advice on how i can improve it, I'm finding it difficult to write in the present tense, and i keep straying into the past tense most of the time. What i really need is help figuring out how to write in the present tens...
by Turbo740
Sun Feb 12, 2012 9:50 am
Forum: Writers Forum
Topic: Tips and tricks for writing?
Replies: 4
Views: 18201

Tips and tricks for writing?

Does anyone have any tips and tricks for writing fics, I've planned out a main story and events for each chapter, but i'm finding it a bit hard linking it together/ creating a flow in the piece, I'm also finding it difficult to get different words for 'Said'. if every word after a line was 'said' th...
by Turbo740
Tue Feb 07, 2012 5:45 pm
Forum: General Non-Pony Discussions
Topic: Rage - Not at all like fallout
Replies: 3
Views: 28199

Rage - Not at all like fallout

If anyone is thinking of buying the game RAGE because you thought it looked a lot like fallout but with better graphics, don't. Its entirely different to it in every way. :pipshrug: Bad points - game is in first person. You very rarely get to see your character, and when you do, the armour design lo...
by Turbo740
Mon Feb 06, 2012 8:54 am
Forum: Works In Progress
Topic: Proofreading / help needed
Replies: 0
Views: 11885

Proofreading / help needed

I've just finished chapter 3 but i need help making it better somehow. It has an Ok storyline, but i'm not that good with describing/ setting the scene, can anyone help me out by making it more exciting? Here's the link if you want to edit it https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lgmeXOZLiCacNWlpOIA7A...
by Turbo740
Sat Feb 04, 2012 6:55 pm
Forum: Works In Progress
Topic: Help
Replies: 13
Views: 41137

Re: Help

Ok 1 last question for my Fic. The name. I've already published the first 3 chapters but the name doesn't really stand out very much. Is it possible to change the name of yout fic on Fimfiction.net or would i have to re-publish it I was thinking of naming it FoE: Overhauls Adventure or FoE: Endless ...