Fallout: Equestria Resource

Good day, my name is Ironmonger/Lord Korloros (fimfiction) and I'm new to the forum. I'm a bit of a mad scholar of sorts, I find humor in many things (even the horrible ones), I like anything to do with war, I mostly read in my spare time and I am also the author of Fallout Equestria: Armed Redempti...

Alright, so I don't exactly need proofreading, but I would greatly appreciate it if someone would look over my story and point out any oddities or things I could improve. Most of what I get is lurkers and not much feedback aside from my co-author and idea-guys. :twilightsheepish: http://www.fimficti...