(reposting my old reviews from the comments thread)
Originally Posted: July 17, 2011 10:10 PM
Chapter 32 has to have the best beginning to any chapter in a long time. I felt sorry for Littlepip, but she did bring it on herself, and the situations she ended up in were comedy gold.
I'm glad to see Calamity and Velvet Remedy finally get together and their discussion about the relationship at the table was very beautiful.
“Ah take it Ah can’t jus’ say ‘ditto’?”
Been there, done that
“I think they did things on this table.”
I freaked everyone on the house laughing at this line.
Anyway, I wish I could find fault, but except for a couple typos I'm unable to. I'm seriously looking forward to the next chapter, I must see what happens next!
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