The Birth of Pyrelight

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Vidi Kitty
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The Birth of Pyrelight

Post by Vidi Kitty » Fri Dec 07, 2012 4:20 am

So I wrote up a short story called The Birth of Pyrelight, which can be found here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/54559/T ... -Pyrelight

I'm very proud of how it turned out so far, but I'm having a bit of trouble continuing it. Currently I'm debating on if I should stay in the first person perspective of Pyrelight only, or if I should switch it up chapter to chapter by staying in the first person but swapping characters.

:bjshrug:

Any thoughts or comments would be much appreciated.
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Re: The Birth of Pyrelight

Post by f1r3w4rr10r » Fri Dec 07, 2012 8:36 am

I just read it and I really liked it. You conveyed the feeling pretty well and created some pretty good and sad parts. I would love to read more of it.
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