Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes.Epilogue Proofread

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Post by Arcane_Scroll » Wed Apr 25, 2012 2:45 am

Oh yes, very much so! I can't wait to see what is coming next!

I've been seeing the story coming up in chat more and more often, it's gaining a good sized readership.
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 16 Proof re

Post by otherunicorn » Wed Apr 25, 2012 8:46 am

Thanks for proof reading, guys.
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 16 Proof re

Post by Pinkie Pie! » Wed Apr 25, 2012 2:35 pm

You're welcome, just finished my read through
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 17 Proof re

Post by otherunicorn » Thu May 03, 2012 8:28 am

Chapter 17 - something a little different.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hB3 ... 5SZZI/edit
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 17 Proof re

Post by Pinkie Pie! » Thu May 03, 2012 9:56 am

I gave it a read through and really quite enjoyed it. Great chapter!
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 18 Proof re

Post by otherunicorn » Mon May 14, 2012 6:05 am

And once again, Anne goes out adventuring... or did this story just go down the drain?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HqH ... 4jgPE/edit
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 18 Proof re

Post by NitoKa » Mon May 14, 2012 8:46 am

Okay, the chapters good, as always. Just very small spelling errors. I noticed one time you called Demi, Semi. Of you want me to point out more just ask.
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 18 Proof re

Post by Arcane_Scroll » Mon May 14, 2012 12:06 pm

Great chapter, and as usual you ended right as something is about to happen. I loved her interaction with the sprite bot XD

Commented on it for you :)
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 18 Proof re

Post by Nyerguds » Mon May 14, 2012 5:20 pm

I'm going through it too. any comments from "Maarten Meuris" are mine (well, the avatar should be enough of a hint) ;)
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 19 Proof re

Post by otherunicorn » Tue May 29, 2012 11:44 pm

For the two or three of you that care... Chapter 19!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eqc ... WyJiU/edit

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