Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes.Epilogue Proofread
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a little late on the proof read, so you can't really call it that anymore, but I did found a couple of minor errors. Anyway sorry for the late reading, been pretty busy with life the universe and everything. Hope I contributed some!
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Welcome back to the land of the living! Yup, you contributed. Thanks.
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 26 Proof re
The chapters keep getting better and better!
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 27 Woot. Pr
Chapter 27 is up for proof reading/comments https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ulQ ... yyMw8/edit
Please ignore the fact that all of the formatting is in BBCode.
Please ignore the fact that all of the formatting is in BBCode.
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 27 Woot. Pr
Not much to comment on, everything looked great. Great chapter!
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 28 Proofrea
Chapter 28 is up for proof reading/comments https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iqW ... jshLc/edit
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 28 Proofrea
I read it over, one typo and one possible misplaced comma. You are seriously improving as a writer!
This was a good chapter, great scenes with the raiders.
This was a good chapter, great scenes with the raiders.
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Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 29 Proofrea
Chapter 29 is up for proof reading/comments https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Gm4 ... Ohz7c/edit
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Just finished, great chapter!