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Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes.Epilogue Proofread
Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 1:09 am
by otherunicorn
Epilogue draft is up.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aRF ... sp=sharing
Probably full of errors. Has varying tenses (deliberately) Like it, lump it, or make suggestions.
I've been ill for weeks, and I'm sick of sitting on it.
Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 8 Proof rea
Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 10:00 am
by Pinkie Pie!
I read through it and made some comments.
I enjoyed reading this one. Good job.
Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 8 Proof rea
Posted: Fri Jan 06, 2012 6:22 pm
by otherunicorn
Thank you
Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 8 Proof rea
Posted: Sat Jan 07, 2012 12:03 am
by Arcane_Scroll
Finally have free time to read, commenting now.
Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 9 Proof rea
Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 4:55 am
by otherunicorn
Yay, this chapter was a pain to get out. Part of what I wrote to be in the last chapter was pushed back, first to this chapter, then again to next chapter.
Commentable proof reading copy:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vAA ... A-a58/edit
Please ignore the fact that all of the formatting is in BBCode.
Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 9 Proof rea
Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 6:19 am
by Arcane_Scroll
Copied from Google docs chat in case you miss it:
Ok, I read through it once, got what I saw. I'll try to do another read through tomorrow if I get time and see if I find anything else.
Great chapter, I like the "perk"
Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 9 Proof rea
Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 8:19 am
by Pinkie Pie!
Another great chapter!
I had a really hard time finding anything to comment on.
Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 9 Proof rea
Posted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 3:27 pm
by otherunicorn
Thanks for the proofread guys
Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 9 Proof rea
Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 5:04 am
by otherunicorn
Re: Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes. Chapter 10 Proof re
Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 10:21 am
by Arcane_Scroll
Ok, I left comments. Wow, this was a good chapter!