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Operation: New Dawn.

Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:09 pm
by son0fgrim
After my first (miserable) attempt at writing a FO:E fan-fic I went back to the drawing board with what I'd learned. Operation New Dawn is the result of me wiping the slat clean and starting over.

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Image by Mistermech. (because he's awesome!)

Overview:
A few years The SPP towers were activated, the one in Chicacolt went offline. This resulted in the whole area being torn up by unpredictable weather. The NCR launched a joint operation with Applejack's Rangers to investigate the reason why the tower had been deactivated, and to reactivate it so they could annex the city. Special Lieutenant "Freelancer" and his squad are deployed along with a Squad of AppleJack's Rangers lead by Paladin Stone Hoof into Chicacolt. However, Things are not as simple as the they were lead to believe...

CH 1: Freelancer
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CH 2: Vulgar display of power
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CH 3: ???

Tell me what you think, discuss, do whatever.

Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 3:58 pm
by son0fgrim
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Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 4:04 pm
by Pokon
Taptaptap. :lol:

Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 7:50 pm
by son0fgrim
OK, as I'm writing, I am indeed seeing some of you (Anonymous user #) reading up in the corner of the screen.
Feel free to comment on the story here or asking me questions after reading. If I didn't want people asking me stuff I wouldn't have made a thread.

Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 8:41 pm
by Sgt Muffin
There are a few grammatical mistakes in the first chapter.... I don't know how to fix them but they are there.

Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 9:25 pm
by Pokon
Yeah, seems that there is a lot of unneeded capital letters. Not every gun needs to be givin a name, you know.

Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Posted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 10:03 pm
by son0fgrim
Pokon wrote:Yeah, seems that there is a lot of unneeded capital letters. Not every gun needs to be givin a name, you know.
Proper nouns, they will stay capitalized. when they are referred to later they won't be capitalized.

Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Posted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:07 am
by son0fgrim
CH2 finished.