Hi guys. I sortof need a proofreader or two to check through my fanfic to give me advice on how i can improve it, I'm finding it difficult to write in the present tense, and i keep straying into the past tense most of the time.
What i really need is help figuring out how to write in the present tense correctly - or if possible, a co-writer to help me correct any mistakes
Fallout equestria - Endless roadtrip
Fallout equestria - Endless roadtrip
The equestrian wasteland is total freedom, but with that freedom there's a burden you must carry for the rest of your life. You have to be strong, face your fears and fight for your freedom, because if you don't, the wasteland will tear you apart.
One way or another.
One way or another.
Re: Fallout equestria - Endless roadtrip
Here's the (new updated) chapters - i'll post them here before i post them on Fimfic
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
The equestrian wasteland is total freedom, but with that freedom there's a burden you must carry for the rest of your life. You have to be strong, face your fears and fight for your freedom, because if you don't, the wasteland will tear you apart.
One way or another.
One way or another.