Fallout: Equestria Resource

Hi guys. I sortof need a proofreader or two to check through my fanfic to give me advice on how i can improve it, I'm finding it difficult to write in the present tense, and i keep straying into the past tense most of the time.

What i really need is help figuring out how to write in the present tense correctly - or if possible, a co-writer to help me correct any mistakes

Here's the (new updated) chapters - i'll post them here before i post them on Fimfic

Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3