Fallout Equestria: Cogs of Justice

[Zab]

Oh my, it appears I posted this in the wrong part of the forum for a while and just now realized it.

Erm.
Crap.

Well, anyway, here's the story that I wrote, Cogs of Justice. Although, it's really just a piece o' crap. I'd much rather everyone just read something, anything more worthwhile than this. But if you inquire further, I won't stop ya.

Prologue: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xeK ... fHII/edit#
Chapter 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/13oK ... xEl4/edit#

Description:
'An outcast from his own Stable, one mechanic pony found himself stranded in the wastes with little to no experience whatsoever. Relying on his wits and his speed, he endures the hardships of the wastes, but not without the price. His actions begin to take a toll on him, gradually affecting his sanity. He was told he had no future, no purpose, but he has found what he was destined for, and wants nothing more to be rid of it.

Peace and safety cannot be far away, for the gears and cogs of the machine known as Justice turn forevermore, so long as someone takes up the responsibility.'

But yea, it'd probably be better to read something other than my waste of time. But go ahead if you want.
Some feedback and improvements would be really appreciated, too. I probably left many, many mistakes in it between the edit version and the final version.