Fallout Equestria: Endless Night (Critiquing required)
Posted: Thu Jul 26, 2012 2:21 am
Hey everypony so a few weeks back i decided to write my own side story after reading Fallout Equestria and chapter 44 of Project horizons.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DAP ... 8AXkA/edit
Edit: If you guys do read this please leave some feedback, I want to improve the story more but am unable to myself since being the creator I see nothing wrong with anything. Literately anything would help, ive been told there's some spelling errors but besides that there has to be some plot hole(s) i didn't fill in.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DAP ... 8AXkA/edit
Edit: If you guys do read this please leave some feedback, I want to improve the story more but am unable to myself since being the creator I see nothing wrong with anything. Literately anything would help, ive been told there's some spelling errors but besides that there has to be some plot hole(s) i didn't fill in.