Fallout: Equestria Resource

So I wrote up a short story called The Birth of Pyrelight, which can be found here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/54559/T ... -Pyrelight

I'm very proud of how it turned out so far, but I'm having a bit of trouble continuing it. Currently I'm debating on if I should stay in the first person perspective of Pyrelight only, or if I should switch it up chapter to chapter by staying in the first person but swapping characters.



Any thoughts or comments would be much appreciated.

I just read it and I really liked it. You conveyed the feeling pretty well and created some pretty good and sad parts. I would love to read more of it.