Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes
Proofread
Note to self. Don't drink!
Note to self. Don't drink!
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes
Awesome! Thanks a lot, your proofreading has really helped me!
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes
And here is chapter 4!
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done!
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I am very glad that you keep pointing out my various errors, it really helps improving the quality!
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Re: Proofreading requested: Ashes to Ashes
Chapter 5 is up now! Read, comment, criticise, you know, the usual deal
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Finished
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Aaaaand fixed. I also couldn't find an alternative for partly and part, sadly.
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Chapter 6: Revenge is up for proofreading. I'm afraid I made a bit of a mess out of this one though.
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I'll get to it when I can, I'm trying to get my own one up for proof reading today too.
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