Proofread requested: Honor and Survival

Strong Hooves · Post by **Strong Hooves** » Wed Mar 28, 2012 1:24 pm

This is my new story to be put here for reviews and proofreading! Any comments on what I need to improve on or anything I should fix would be greatly appreciated! If you have any comments on how I can improve my story, please E-mail me at Jackson.Venegas@hotmail.com
the link below leads to the cover page, so every time I update it will show up here! Any help and comments you have will be awesome!! Thanks!!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xdY ... El9jA/edit#

Pinkie Pie! · Post by **Pinkie Pie!** » Fri Mar 30, 2012 5:19 am

done with proofreading

Strong Hooves · Post by **Strong Hooves** » Fri Mar 30, 2012 10:05 am

Thanks! Chapter two is up

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dUe ... wtWVI/edit

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Proofread requested: Honor and Survival

Proofread requested: Honor and Survival

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