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Proofread requested: Honor and Survival

Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 1:24 pm
by Strong Hooves
This is my new story to be put here for reviews and proofreading! Any comments on what I need to improve on or anything I should fix would be greatly appreciated! If you have any comments on how I can improve my story, please E-mail me at Jackson.Venegas@hotmail.com
the link below leads to the cover page, so every time I update it will show up here! Any help and comments you have will be awesome!! Thanks!!
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xdY ... El9jA/edit#

Re: Proofread requested: Honor and Survival

Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2012 5:19 am
by Pinkie Pie!
done with proofreading

Re: Proofread requested: Honor and Survival

Posted: Fri Mar 30, 2012 10:05 am
by Strong Hooves