Fallout: Equestria Resource

I'm writing a side story called Fallout Equestria: Wild Wasteland, and I need someone to work as my editor/prereader. I like to think my grammar and spelling is pretty good, but two heads are better than one, as they say. Also, more importantly, I need someone to give me their opinions on the story itself; the more annotations and feedback, the better. I already have the rough draft of the prologue ready for anyone who wants to volunteer.

P.S. I don't think this will be an issue, but it will get rather violent at some points so it's not for the faint of heart. (As far as how violent... lets just say the main character gets the Bloody Mess perk and leave it at that.)

I'm willing to do it, if you'll accept me. I already sent you a message for details, thanks!

Ok, Tutis in on-board. However, I talked with him and I think having two or more would be good too, so if anyone else wants to help, they can.

Will there be a dead daring-doo inside a fridge?

Wow, sorry it took so long to respond, how did I not see this? Anyway, there is PLENTY of weird stuff in this one, although I wasn't planning on any fridge corpses, specifically. But its still unwritten, so maybe.

Y'know, on second thought, yes, I'm totally doing that. Dead Daring Doo. Just thought of a cool scene with that.

I'd love to help too. Anything I canto help really. Also I recently sent in my audition for the part as Littlepip...but I havent heard anything yet. Any news?