Hello! Help please!

[TIB_The_Signless]

Hey everyone! Or....anyone that actually reads this!
I'm going to try keep this brief, so please don't go yet!

I'm here because a friend on DeviantArt advised I come here for help with the side-fic I'm doing. Obviously, it's a Fallout Equestria one, or I'd be in the wrong forums!
It's nothing big, just a little something I've wanted to do for a long time now. My own Fallout Equestria story, with some friend's OC's. I've been planning the story for months now, and I only started typing up the finished product last week. But, I didn't much like it....
So, I got to chapter 5 and stopped, for now. I'm putting it back into production, adding new stuff, taking away old. That's why I'm looking for some help.....

The old Prologue to the story, I would like some one to proof read it for me! It's not much of a spoiler or anything, so I'm happy to send it to anyone interested. I could post it in a topic here too, couldn't I?
Anyway, I would love some feedback! You see, I want to know what's good and bad about the prologue. That way, I can put extra work where it's needed, and make a hopefully enjoyable story.

Now, I think I'm going to spend the night reading a few of the side-fics here! Because I haven't read any except for Pink Eyes, and Project Horizons (I'm still reading about Blackjack!!!)

Thanks for reading c:

[Shady_steps]

hay ^^ welcome to FOE home of madness and... well, more madness.

while this might be more at home in the WIP book area of the forum its ok because the mods here are super chill and cool.

i would be interested in helping if i did not have a backlog of stuff to read, but good luck anyway, check out the IRC sometime.

[f1r3w4rr10r]

Welcome! And yes, you might want to post it where Shady said. Also you might want to post a few chapters and update regularly, than writing everything and releasing it at once.

[TIB_The_Signless]

Thanks to both of you for answering, I really like this site.
I will upload the prologue to WIP, then work on it from there. And yeah now that you mention it, it'd be better to work on it over time.

But uhh, what's the IRC?

[SilverlightPony]

Thanks to both of you for answering, I really like this site.
I will upload the prologue to WIP, then work on it from there. And yeah now that you mention it, it'd be better to work on it over time.

But uhh, what's the IRC?

Most of us hang out in the #FalloutEquestria chatroom on Canternet IRC. This link will take you straight to it in your browser, but I recommend using a stand-alone client if you're familiar with IRC.

[TIB_The_Signless]

Thanks to both of you for answering, I really like this site.
I will upload the prologue to WIP, then work on it from there. And yeah now that you mention it, it'd be better to work on it over time.

But uhh, what's the IRC?

Most of us hang out in the #FalloutEquestria chatroom on Canternet IRC. This link will take you straight to it in your browser, but I recommend using a stand-alone client if you're familiar with IRC.

Oh, alright! I'll be sure to check it out when I get some time.