Suggestion help, please?
Suggestion help, please?
Hey, I was thinking of writing my own side story to pass the time. I was, well, wondering if I could get some help entirely making certain points of the story that I can't seem to fill in.
I-I'm just seeing if I could be approved to make it before just heading in blindly making it, is all. I-I could post some kind of a basic outline.
I-I'm just seeing if I could be approved to make it before just heading in blindly making it, is all. I-I could post some kind of a basic outline.
Let it be known that these wretched lives shall be taken today under the watchful eyes of those innocents who have died, pleading for their blood to be shed...
... Or maybe we can just dance! Dancing is always fun with cold-blooded murderers! Lots of neat stories!
... Sometimes I wonder why I was given the ability to converse with myself... Or why this body of mine is part machine...
... Or maybe we can just dance! Dancing is always fun with cold-blooded murderers! Lots of neat stories!
... Sometimes I wonder why I was given the ability to converse with myself... Or why this body of mine is part machine...
Re: Suggestion help, please?
I'd be happy to help, just send me an email. I sent you my email in a private message, I hope to hear from you soon.
Re: Suggestion help, please?
In addition to this sight write your outlign and any questions you may have in a Gdoc and ask someone here https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Kao ... t?hl=en_US to take a look at it, you will probably get two or three folk to help you in short order.
Re: Suggestion help, please?
Well, I've written up a prologue, and I have the thing set up. Problem is that I'm not good with names. Names! My weakness! I can't decide what to name the story.
Let it be known that these wretched lives shall be taken today under the watchful eyes of those innocents who have died, pleading for their blood to be shed...
... Or maybe we can just dance! Dancing is always fun with cold-blooded murderers! Lots of neat stories!
... Sometimes I wonder why I was given the ability to converse with myself... Or why this body of mine is part machine...
... Or maybe we can just dance! Dancing is always fun with cold-blooded murderers! Lots of neat stories!
... Sometimes I wonder why I was given the ability to converse with myself... Or why this body of mine is part machine...
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Re: Suggestion help, please?
Mine is Honest Hearts in a different language, mix it up a little, id say look at some old fallout references and u should get a idea.
lol, why are you reading my signature?
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Re: Suggestion help, please?
What is the story about? What is the central theme?Zab wrote:Well, I've written up a prologue, and I have the thing set up. Problem is that I'm not good with names. Names! My weakness! I can't decide what to name the story.
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Alright, well, I have everything ready and all. Erm, should I just post the prologue here or should I wait and see if someone else should edit it first...or something. Curse my ability to not know what to do.
Let it be known that these wretched lives shall be taken today under the watchful eyes of those innocents who have died, pleading for their blood to be shed...
... Or maybe we can just dance! Dancing is always fun with cold-blooded murderers! Lots of neat stories!
... Sometimes I wonder why I was given the ability to converse with myself... Or why this body of mine is part machine...
... Or maybe we can just dance! Dancing is always fun with cold-blooded murderers! Lots of neat stories!
... Sometimes I wonder why I was given the ability to converse with myself... Or why this body of mine is part machine...
Re: Suggestion help, please?
Its your decision Zab, but I would let someone look it over first to proofread and edit before posting for everyone to see. That way you're showing your absolute best to everyone. But its your decision.
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Well, if anyone wants to proofread it, I'd be glad to give 'em the link.
Let it be known that these wretched lives shall be taken today under the watchful eyes of those innocents who have died, pleading for their blood to be shed...
... Or maybe we can just dance! Dancing is always fun with cold-blooded murderers! Lots of neat stories!
... Sometimes I wonder why I was given the ability to converse with myself... Or why this body of mine is part machine...
... Or maybe we can just dance! Dancing is always fun with cold-blooded murderers! Lots of neat stories!
... Sometimes I wonder why I was given the ability to converse with myself... Or why this body of mine is part machine...
- Silver Tongue
- Posts: 65
- Joined: Wed Mar 28, 2012 2:00 am