Fallout: Las Pegasus Comic

[Heimdal]

I've been working hard on a comic, and trying to find avenues of exposure for it, although I'm unsure of how to accomplish that. So I'm posting it up here. Also, criticisms, thought, etc. welcome!



Starts here -> http://heimdal00.deviantart.com/art/Fal ... -299601329
Page 2 ->http://heimdal00.deviantart.com/art/Fal ... -299892636
Page 3 ->http://heimdal00.deviantart.com/art/Fal ... -300950250
Page 4 ->http://heimdal00.deviantart.com/art/Fal ... -301369332
Page 5 ->http://heimdal00.deviantart.com/art/Fal ... -302242650
Page 6 ->http://heimdal00.deviantart.com/art/Fal ... -302694749
Page 7 ->http://heimdal00.deviantart.com/art/Fal ... -309475470
Page 8 ->http://heimdal00.deviantart.com/art/Fal ... -313030473
Page 9 ->http://heimdal00.deviantart.com/art/Fal ... -316546357

[mimezinga]

So far i like this story and your style is very nice. The only thing i could say so far on the down side is that it's not always clear what is going on, still it doesn't need to be explained because wall of text is bad no matter what.
So, in the end my opinion is: go for it, good job so far

[Heimdal]

Hi mime! (I am Scrap_Metal, btw)

I try to avoid making it word-heavy as much as I can, opting for visual appeal primarily. That's one thing I struggle to balance.. Minimal text vs. Clarity. I ought to be able to communicate enough with the visuals alone, but I'm figuring that out as I go as well.

Bah! Words. I'm a terrible writer!