Operation: New Dawn.

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Operation: New Dawn.

Post by son0fgrim » Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:09 pm

After my first (miserable) attempt at writing a FO:E fan-fic I went back to the drawing board with what I'd learned. Operation New Dawn is the result of me wiping the slat clean and starting over.

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Overview:
A few years The SPP towers were activated, the one in Chicacolt went offline. This resulted in the whole area being torn up by unpredictable weather. The NCR launched a joint operation with Applejack's Rangers to investigate the reason why the tower had been deactivated, and to reactivate it so they could annex the city. Special Lieutenant "Freelancer" and his squad are deployed along with a Squad of AppleJack's Rangers lead by Paladin Stone Hoof into Chicacolt. However, Things are not as simple as the they were lead to believe...

CH 1: Freelancer
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CH 2: Vulgar display of power
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CH 3: ???

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Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Post by son0fgrim » Tue Jan 24, 2012 3:58 pm

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Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Post by Pokon » Tue Jan 24, 2012 4:04 pm

Taptaptap. :lol:
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Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Post by son0fgrim » Tue Jan 24, 2012 7:50 pm

OK, as I'm writing, I am indeed seeing some of you (Anonymous user #) reading up in the corner of the screen.
Feel free to comment on the story here or asking me questions after reading. If I didn't want people asking me stuff I wouldn't have made a thread.
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Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Post by Sgt Muffin » Tue Jan 24, 2012 8:41 pm

There are a few grammatical mistakes in the first chapter.... I don't know how to fix them but they are there.
Before the End is the story of an officer during the last two years of the war against the zebras. The story follows his journey through the Battle for Shattered Hoof Ridge, Battle of Stalliongrad and into the unknown.
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Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Post by Pokon » Tue Jan 24, 2012 9:25 pm

Yeah, seems that there is a lot of unneeded capital letters. Not every gun needs to be givin a name, you know.
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Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Post by son0fgrim » Tue Jan 24, 2012 10:03 pm

Pokon wrote:Yeah, seems that there is a lot of unneeded capital letters. Not every gun needs to be givin a name, you know.
Proper nouns, they will stay capitalized. when they are referred to later they won't be capitalized.
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Re: Operation: New Dawn.

Post by son0fgrim » Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:07 am

CH2 finished.
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