Fallout Equestria: CoJ

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Zab
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Fallout Equestria: CoJ

Post by Zab » Mon Apr 02, 2012 10:58 pm

Hi, everyone. Well I'm finally working up the courage to try and post my story so far here. I got a few good reviews already and would gladly appreciate it if some others gave it a look as well.

Prologue:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xeK ... TfHII/edit

Story: Born into a Stable and looked down upon by everyone, one lone Vigilante is suddenly and violently thrown into the wastes with little more than the things he carries with him. As his lineage is revealed to him, he finds the wasteland slowly draining his sanity and leaving him a wreck of a pony. He encounters many trials and challenges, which he overcomes by diplomacy, intelligence, or, if needed, accuracy. He was told he had no purpose, but now that he does, he wishes nothing but to be rid of it. Although he fights to make these lands more peaceful, the cogs of the machine known as justice never stop turning.
Let it be known that these wretched lives shall be taken today under the watchful eyes of those innocents who have died, pleading for their blood to be shed...
... Or maybe we can just dance! Dancing is always fun with cold-blooded murderers! Lots of neat stories!
... Sometimes I wonder why I was given the ability to converse with myself... Or why this body of mine is part machine...

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