Fallout Equestria: Stable Crawler

[Rainedash]

Synopsis: After Littlepip defeated the Enclave, the pegasi cities were left in a difficult position. Many pegasi still support the Enclave but others want to completely remake the government. Eventually, around the same time as the afterwards in the original story, civil war broke out. One of the cities hit hard during the war was Las Pegasus, the home of Ember. This left her in a position where she had to get work on the surface.

I'd love to have a bit of feedback on this.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/19703/F ... le-Crawler

[Pinkie Pie!]

I haven't read it, but it amuses me that you use the same name for your protagonist as me. You'd better make it a good story

[Rainedash]

I haven't read it, but it amuses me that you use the same name for your protagonist as me. You'd better make it a good story

Ha. I'll do my best.

[Rainedash]

Chapter 2 is up. Links:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/19703/F ... le-Crawler
http://www.ponyfictionarchive.net/views ... 20&index=1

Read, enjoy and comment.