Fallout: Equestria. We're no Heroes.Epilogue Proofread

[otherunicorn]

All of a sudden, everything I am reading has stopped. Has everyone run out of steam?
Anyway, here is my latest. I hope it was worth the wait.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VSj ... hjJN0/edit

[Pinkie Pie!]

Well, it certainly was! Found a couple of small errors and quite enjoyed this chapter. It also occurs to me that Anne is really, really good at anything mechanical, with the only hard part being the issue of getting close. The villains and heroes are well portrayed, not black and white, but a nice shade of grey. Well done!

[Arcane_Scroll]

Awesome chapter as always! I started to suspect the ending, but it was even more surprising then I thought! Great work!

[mimezinga]

yep, good chapter. keep it going because i like the ride ^_^

[otherunicorn]

Chapter 22 is up.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s34 ... -msnI/edit

[Arcane_Scroll]

Read and commented. I didn't find many issues in this chapter at all. As for the chapter itself, it was great and carried on from the previous chapter very well!

[otherunicorn]

Thank you. It was an unusual chapter to write.

[otherunicorn]

Chapter 23 is up for proof reading.

For what it's worth, I've finally managed to extract the next chapter from my reluctant brain....

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_Yc ... LYpBM/edit

Please ignore the fact that all of the formatting is in BBCode.

[Arcane_Scroll]

Read, only a couple comments, very problem free! Good chapter, I'm glad to see the team is coming back together

[otherunicorn]

Hardest chapter yet. It's taken me 23 chapters to get to this.... what a journey!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nQC ... opJxM/edit

Please ignore the fact that all of the formatting is in BBCode.