The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)

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Chapter 17 is up. And with it, bad news. My parents are going to pretty much cut my writing time to 1, 2 hours per day and also restrict my laptop usage down to pretty much studying for the summer... on the grounds of wanting me to do something more productive during the summer. Yeah, it sucks like a bucket of mosquitoes. Don't know how many actually pay attention to these little updates I put up but... please bear with me. I'm sorry.

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Tiny chapter 18 is up. And yes, I did a lot of it stealthily. Woo?

Gearing up for the middle portion of the story...

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So, uh... sorry to be a bother, but I'm down to one pre-reader again. I'd rather not overburden this one, and I'm sorry, but is anyone who reads this available for pre-reading? I generally just ask for content concerns is all...

[f1r3w4rr10r]

I would love to, but I would have to start reading it in the first place. I will put it on the first place on my list of to read FoE fics. I will come back to you when I caught up. (I need to finish another story first though.)

[Adder1]

*squee* Really? Thank you thank you thank you! 8D

[SilverlightPony]

I would offer to pre-read for you, as I'm nitpicky enough to be a great proofreader. Unfortunately, I would also have to catch up from the beginning, and I'm lazy enough that once I started actually proofreading for you I'd have trouble sticking with it.

[Adder1]

Well, at least you're posting here. People DO care! =D

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Reflection One is now up. A proper story's gotta start somewhere...

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Reflection Two is now up and running. Every hero has humble beginnings.

Too bad Frost isn't one of them.

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Reflection Three is now up. In a city of giants, it helps to think big.

Link is here: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2702/23 ... r-Yourself