Fallout Equestria: Probed

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Fallout Equestria: Probed

Post by Artemiev » Wed Nov 02, 2011 12:44 pm

(note: this is a completed one shot story, so I dunno if it should be posted here, but whatever :pipshrug:)

Fallout Equestria: Probed

[Adventure] [Crossover] [Grimbright] [Comedy]

Synopsis: A menace from the Stars... Aliens abduct a hardy raider unicorn buck, struggling with hangover. Little did they know however that Buckshot is a pony they cannot handle, and as the rampage escalates, it becomes clear that it is the Stars that should fear the ponies, not the other way around...

A sarcastic comedy which should not be taken seriously, like, AT ALL.

Enjoy, leave feedback, etc.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Probed

Post by The Jack » Wed Nov 02, 2011 5:22 pm

....
:pipshrug:
On my to read list, if only for the title. xD
Fallout: Equestria; Aqua Pura; http://forum.fallout-equestria.com/view ... f=17&t=107

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Re: Fallout Equestria: Probed

Post by Artemiev » Fri Nov 04, 2011 11:08 am

Doodled some with the Alien Battlemech that appears in the story. By the way, I won't bite if you post your opinion here about the story, if you actually read it :pipshrug:.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Probed

Post by Kashin » Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:00 pm

While I have not read your story (I have my plate full with 3 pre reads, 5 vector commissions and writing my own story) I must say that the mech is epic.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Probed

Post by Damhoof » Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:38 pm

Kashin wrote:While I have not read your story (I have my plate full with 3 pre reads, 5 vector commissions and writing my own story) I must say that the mech is epic.

well it`s only 4k words. The shortness makes it easy to pick up and get a feeling off.
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Probed

Post by Rippedshadow » Fri Nov 04, 2011 8:15 pm

I found myself giggling madly half the time, other then a few errors, it was pretty good. For some reason I was surprised he didn't go through with his thought on whether he could have sex with one of the "aliens", my face had my hand poised over it, ready to slap when it happened, but it never did. Kinda grateful for that, actually.

Nonetheless, it was an entertaining take on the mothership zeta DLC, good job!
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Probed

Post by Nightmare Luna » Sat Nov 05, 2011 2:34 am

That was really good. Loved the ending!You going to do more with Buckshot?
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Probed

Post by Artemiev » Sat Nov 05, 2011 7:56 am

Glad you ponies liked it =).
Well, since so far everypony wants to see more of Buckshot, I'm kinda forced to continue the tales of that maniac :pipshrug: . I'm planning a multitude of one-shot fics and short stories, all of them in the mood of Probed. Just a little hint for his next adventure: Old World Hooves =P...
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Probed

Post by The Jack » Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:47 am

*reads that this is a completed oneshot*
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This will be read later tonight. xD
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Re: Fallout Equestria: Probed

Post by Pinkie Pie! » Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:48 am

very funny
I liked it!
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