The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)

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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)

Post by f1r3w4rr10r » Fri Nov 30, 2012 2:26 am

As I already said, it was a heartwarming chapter. Hummingbird is a really good and believable character.
And hot damn, I can't wait to see Zoleks again. >.<

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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)

Post by Adder1 » Fri Nov 30, 2012 3:12 pm

f1r3w4rr10r wrote:As I already said, it was a heartwarming chapter. Hummingbird is a really good and believable character.
And hot damn, I can't wait to see Zoleks again. >.<
Great to hear you liked it- and Hummingbird. ^^ Phew, glad things are working for this character. @.@
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.

Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria

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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)

Post by Adder1 » Tue Dec 25, 2012 3:01 am

Reflection Ten is now up. The future is birthed by the present- the present by the past.
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.

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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)

Post by Adder1 » Thu Jan 31, 2013 1:20 am

Reflection Eleven is now up. Even the good ol' days weren't all that good.
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Post by f1r3w4rr10r » Thu Jan 31, 2013 3:40 am

Going to read it right away and update my sheets. ;P

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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)

Post by f1r3w4rr10r » Thu Jan 31, 2013 2:19 pm

I read it now and it was pretty good.
You are also tempting me to write a "Reflection 11.5" ;P

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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)

Post by f1r3w4rr10r » Wed Mar 13, 2013 3:56 am

Just on Adder's behalf: Reflection 12 is up on FiMfiction.

And Adder:
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Please! Please please PLEASE don't make them split up! >.<

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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)

Post by f1r3w4rr10r » Mon Mar 25, 2013 12:33 pm

Well Reflection 13 was interesting, although not much world moving happened.
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DAMN YOU ADDER1! I knew it was inevitable, but it's still sad, that they had to go seperate ways. :(

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