The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
As I already said, it was a heartwarming chapter. Hummingbird is a really good and believable character.
And hot damn, I can't wait to see Zoleks again. >.<
And hot damn, I can't wait to see Zoleks again. >.<
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Great to hear you liked it- and Hummingbird. ^^ Phew, glad things are working for this character. @.@f1r3w4rr10r wrote:As I already said, it was a heartwarming chapter. Hummingbird is a really good and believable character.
And hot damn, I can't wait to see Zoleks again. >.<
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Reflection Ten is now up. The future is birthed by the present- the present by the past.
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Reflection Eleven is now up. Even the good ol' days weren't all that good.
It's hard to kill memories when you remember everything.
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
Fallout: Equestria- The Last Sentinel, a side-story based on Kkat's Fallout: Equestria
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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Going to read it right away and update my sheets. ;P
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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
I read it now and it was pretty good.
You are also tempting me to write a "Reflection 11.5" ;P
You are also tempting me to write a "Reflection 11.5" ;P
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Re: The Last Sentinel (Looking for Feedback, Pre-Readers)
Well Reflection 13 was interesting, although not much world moving happened.
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